All Comments on 'Revenge is so Sweet Ch. 04'

the mindset of a kid,who haven't been around the block.you write with the mind of a 2yr.old.

You need an editor as you have poor spelling capabilities and you mention people who are not in the story. (Who is Sheila?) I am not perfect and I usually understood what and whom you meant. But I was entertained fairly well and will look at some of your other stories.

Worst story I have read in a long time.