All Comments on 'Barangrill'

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Sally meets the infamous Johnnie K and gets it on with him only to find he's really a ghost. Okay ~ on the Jukebox there was Marty Robbins, Johnny Cash, Roy Acuff and Mel Tillis. WHAT! No Earnest Tubb! Ah well...! Wonderful story! Interesting Read!

I feel the story is well written. There seems to be an obscene tempo. I'd like to see a more prolonged and detailed sexual encounter.

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