All Comments on 'Elf Pleasure: Amy'

by damppanties

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Erotic Christmas Doings!

Who ever knew Christmas stories could be filled with Good Cheer and be heavily erotic at the same time. This talented Writer has served up a steaming dish of erotica - complete with Harold and Fabian, two Elves who are skilled at being the perfect 'Ladies Home Companions.' A completely delightful Read! Well Written!

Good Luck in the Contest!

odlumodlumover 17 years ago
Santa, I want an elf...

This could be the wish of every girl on Sanata's list and they don't require batteries. This is a delightful story and a great addition to the series. An enjoyable read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Revenge Voting is Sweet

Of course, ineffective if the revenge is to vote a 5 back at you.

Harold should have been Harriet for a perfect story, but I'll take it as you wrote it.

:)

kb.

oggbashanoggbashanover 17 years ago
Harold is better than ice-cream

I think that Harold the grumpy-looking elf is a great creation.

We need more stories featuring him.

janiexxjaniexxover 17 years ago
Your submission...

...has been mentioned in the New Story Review thread in the Author's Hangout.

rachlourachlouover 17 years ago
a lovely story

and I want my own Elf called Harold!! Good luck :)

ungenderlessungenderlessover 17 years ago
Really cute!

I enjoyed this little tale. Short, but very sweet.

TE999TE999over 17 years ago
Size doesn't matter...

when you get a sexy elf for Christmas. Imaginative and clever. Well written, too. Good luck in the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Loved this one

A great story, Dampie! Lots of fun to read ...with the perfect ending. RL

angelicminxangelicminxover 17 years ago
Very cute

I'm sorry, dampy, but I believe you're out of the last place contest this time. This story is way too good to even come close to last. :D I had to five-bomb ya. Good luck in the 'regular' contest. *Hug* ~Minx

deathlynxdeathlynxover 17 years ago
Very fun!

A hell of a lot of fun! And hot to boot...Makes me want to go out and read more of the related stories!

MunachiMunachiover 17 years ago
great story

now how exactly does one get one of these elfs?

drksideofthemoondrksideofthemoonover 17 years ago
Wonderful

I loved it, a wonderful little tale that was warm, and humorous. You are a good writer, I just wish you would write a little more....

JRavenJRavenover 17 years ago
Another one of these stories?

This was an easy story to five bomb.

But, I wonder what Amy and Fabian were doing in the mean time?

chris 44chris 44over 17 years ago
Thanks for making me smile...

A gentle nicely crafted story, tinged with humour and pathos. Hope you do well with it .

Chris

Selena_KittSelena_Kittover 17 years ago
Ha!

I loved this, Dampie! Great job, good luck in the contest :)

sacksackover 17 years ago
very well written.....

a model of clarity, sweet and humorous. Loved this!

NirvanadragonesNirvanadragonesover 17 years ago
Something different!

I'm very impressed that you wrote this from such an interesting angle!

Now I want more Elf stuff *wink*

Well done, Sweet.

TE999TE999over 17 years ago
Big pleasure...

from a small elf. Clever plot and well written. It's five-bomb time, Dampie! Good luck in the contest.

geronimo_applebygeronimo_applebyover 17 years ago
Sublime

Fantastically well written. You conjur the images perfectly. I hope this does well in the contest.

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinover 17 years ago
DP, you keep the good ones coming, so to speak

Good story, DP, with an original plot, a nice job of character developement and all that other writing jazz.

Rumple

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Loved this series ...

It takes talent to mix humour with the erotic and then still succeed in making the characters cute and appealing. Marvellous job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Elf love

I like your story,but I wanted the elf to make love to the girl not oral sex but something more. I wrote about another story but I thought it was trolls? I love your writhing !!!!!! My email is catlettkaren@yahoo.com

Jim44444Jim44444over 10 years ago
Excellent series.

An enjoyable read on a rainy evening. Your descriptions of the seduction are fabulous. I am going to read more of your stories tonight.

Thanks for writing.

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