by damppanties
Who ever knew Christmas stories could be filled with Good Cheer and be heavily erotic at the same time. This talented Writer has served up a steaming dish of erotica - complete with Harold and Fabian, two Elves who are skilled at being the perfect 'Ladies Home Companions.' A completely delightful Read! Well Written!
Good Luck in the Contest!
This could be the wish of every girl on Sanata's list and they don't require batteries. This is a delightful story and a great addition to the series. An enjoyable read.
Of course, ineffective if the revenge is to vote a 5 back at you.
Harold should have been Harriet for a perfect story, but I'll take it as you wrote it.
:)
kb.
I think that Harold the grumpy-looking elf is a great creation.
We need more stories featuring him.
...has been mentioned in the New Story Review thread in the Author's Hangout.
when you get a sexy elf for Christmas. Imaginative and clever. Well written, too. Good luck in the contest.
A great story, Dampie! Lots of fun to read ...with the perfect ending. RL
I'm sorry, dampy, but I believe you're out of the last place contest this time. This story is way too good to even come close to last. :D I had to five-bomb ya. Good luck in the 'regular' contest. *Hug* ~Minx
A hell of a lot of fun! And hot to boot...Makes me want to go out and read more of the related stories!
I loved it, a wonderful little tale that was warm, and humorous. You are a good writer, I just wish you would write a little more....
This was an easy story to five bomb.
But, I wonder what Amy and Fabian were doing in the mean time?
A gentle nicely crafted story, tinged with humour and pathos. Hope you do well with it .
Chris
I'm very impressed that you wrote this from such an interesting angle!
Now I want more Elf stuff *wink*
Well done, Sweet.
from a small elf. Clever plot and well written. It's five-bomb time, Dampie! Good luck in the contest.
Fantastically well written. You conjur the images perfectly. I hope this does well in the contest.
Good story, DP, with an original plot, a nice job of character developement and all that other writing jazz.
Rumple
It takes talent to mix humour with the erotic and then still succeed in making the characters cute and appealing. Marvellous job.
I like your story,but I wanted the elf to make love to the girl not oral sex but something more. I wrote about another story but I thought it was trolls? I love your writhing !!!!!! My email is catlettkaren@yahoo.com
An enjoyable read on a rainy evening. Your descriptions of the seduction are fabulous. I am going to read more of your stories tonight.
Thanks for writing.