it was great cant wait to hear the next part i hope you do post again
I loved this story but it just made me sad to have the guy who has to ensure that the job is lost feeling badly about doing so, and to know how much the job would mean to the family. So, incrdibly well written but it really got me a bit bummed
Well written and clever story, Selena. This explains why some of us are always late (lol). Good luck in the contest.
I wish Sam would give my woman a push sometimes. Please write more.
cute... witty and playful, thanks for straightening me out on how fairies fair in the new millenium
Love it Selena ~
Great story all the way around, with a tatse of erotica thrown in. Nice wording with a sad tale. BUT there is hope for Sams future encounters, right?
As for the fairy part, I do have pixie dust and a lil muse to amuse me from time to time *winks*
The voice you've given the narrator is light and clever. It draws the reader right in. I really like the basic concept of fate relying on fairies to accomplish those little daily miracles that we as humans tend to overlook. (Also loved the latin ) :D
...but where's the erotic part? I mean, I know there's some mechanical action, but with that mostly impersonal third party narrator, there's no feeling...except sorrow for the poor guy who won't get the job...
I thought this was going to end up with mischief, or even a tragedy. I can't begin to say how glad I was that it ended up like this: it's great.
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