All Comments on 'American Geisha'

by GillianCD

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christieamberleechristieamberleeabout 11 years ago
Oh My!

That was a fantastic story! I particularly liked the fact that the book he had chosen was not one on BDSM. Not that I have a problem with that ... I just wasn't in the mood for it. You wrote the perfect amount of servility into your story. The trick of spraying perfume around the room so that she was invisible to his nose was interesting. I prefer to see my man's nostrils flare as he catches my scent, but for this story what she did was necessary and made the story that much more vivid.

I love your writing style and really hope you write more.

Thanks,

Amber

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