Good moments but so far from possible - come on- who would want a baby in this deal? Just TOO Ridiculous
I wish I was the one marring them.
I liked this a lot. The mother/son bit isn't really my thing, but I LOVED the brother/sister stuff. Lucky Patty. I want a brother like that - one who'll fuck the life out of me
The only thing is that i got a little too romantic and not enough actual sex. Mind you, I'm not saying i dislike the romance.
We loved the HOT story... Please keep writing 'em. I married my niece, her daughter & my sister & my niece is having twins in 9 weeks. And her daughter is late too. Yea!
WOW WHAT A BEAUTIFULL /SEXY STORY, YES IT COULD POSSIABLEY HAPPEN, TO BE REALLY IN LOVE AND HAVE SUCH GOOD POWERFULL SEX IS A ABSERLUTE BLESSING , AND THE NAUGHTY INCEST PART OFF IT WILL ALWAYS KEEP IT HOT; REGARDS PETER
That was one hell of a story. I really enjoyed it, I started to jack off halfways thur the story when his sister grab his dick, DAMN, that was a good story, GREAT JOB WRITER
I wish my sister would fuck me like that
after reading this we made love all night long. we have been having sex since i was 16 and first did it with my mom. then after about 3months my sister who was 14 jioned in when she caught us. we have been doing it on and off for nearly 34years now and dont regreat it one bit. my wife knows and has just started to join us and we have a 14yo daughter we are going to bring into the fold.
It is one of the best story so far i'hve read.....i like the romance in it....
Itz reli d best one ever. Fucking the two is great
I can't even begin to tell you how much I enjoyed that story. I know it was fiction, but I wish more than anything that I could live that life. Thank you so much. Please write more.
Great story incest is great
Apparently this is the second most viewed, voted and commented on story on the site. The first is his dad/daughter thing which I'm not into so I can't judge that one. I'm all about sis/bro, son/mom, and bro/sis/mom threesomes though, so I was really excited to read this because of the attention it got. And when I read it I thought that this was....pretty good, but not the best thing I've read on the site. I dunno. It felt a bit...too unrealistic. There's barely any reluctance or taboo feel to the incest, which is the best part in my opinion, and starting it out with him already having slept with the mother and her being totally okay with it with no reservations I thought deflated it a lot. The sister was sort of reluctant at first but not nearly enough.
Awesome writing skill. one of the very few times that I've found myself drawn in to the story to the point of being genuinely exited for the characters, as though I knew them personally. I only wish it was a little longer. Of the hundreds of these stories that I have read over the years, this is the first one that I've given feedback on. looking forward to reading more exiting, erotic fiction from my new favorite author. Good fucking job!
i love the story and i love the happily ever after part...
Omg that was amazing
That was a very good read.
your story made me so horny that i stopped reading and fucked my Gf.
Beautifully done with the building excitment leading up to an orgasmic cum filled ending and finishing it off with the bible blessing was a great touch also... ;-)
Most of the story was good. Plenty of teasing the reader, building up to the main events. Still, the ending was all just a little too happy and like a fairy tale for my exact taste. Maybe others liked it, but I think there could have been more.
Still, good job. Keep writing.
You ARE such a lucky gut, it's something I ALWAYS wanted to do. Have My mom, AND sister as My lovers and wives. For them to have My babies, and bring them up in a loving house hold. And to bring My daughters into womanhood....
God youre story was great. I was so hot when i finnished. I loved it. The detail and description was awesome too. Good job and definitely thanks for posting!
It was a spellbinding storry once eveeryone got their priorities sorted out. Sister wanted his cock fucking her. Mommy wanted his cock fucking her and he wanted to fuck both his sister and his mom.. In the end it all worked out and he knocked mommy up first, then knocked his sister up second. If they all enjoyed themselves and wanted it to be that way, so be it.
Perhaps a little sequel later on down the road.
I love this story. It made me so horny. Great details and love the plot. I wish I was that guy. He so lucky
I really wanted to read this, but after reading the first half page several times and still not piecing things together, I gave up. It is one thing to build a story line, but another to totally confuse a reader. You obviously know all the characters and how they fit, but give us a bit of a clue as to what on earth is going on, early enough to keep us interested and understanding of who is who and what is what!
The sex was hot and the end oddly romantic
It was amazing i never got borad of the plot which i normally do. Just fabulous i loved it good story!
Mmmmmmmm... I'm so fucking wet now, fingering myself!
I had to stop reading it and the pick up later, bacause I was cumming so
Many times , I even read it on the train and was squirming in my seat
And got a few looks, if the train wasn't full maybe I would have
Popped out a nipple :)
It's not often I give a "5 Star" rating, but when there is total consummation of incestual love, where the "matrimonial ceremony" of wedded bliss is initiated, and a family foundation of pregnancy occurs, the story gets my total blessing of the highest honor. In this story not only did these events occur, but they were planned and two family members, the mother and her daughter both were impregnated, and a cermonial marriage consummated the three new parents-- a husband and wives. The story is totally awessome, totally celestial, totally heavenly, totally unsurpassed!! This story reached the pinnacle, the ultimate of devotion and committment and the firm foundation of a future so full of admiration and love that no other life style could equal!!
The story/writing could have had more detail, and been slower in reaching the final stages of their committments and pregnancies. Although the messages and intents of the characters (Mother Christine, Daughter Patty and Son Billy) came through and was understood, still the message was a little confusing at times.
Though the story is short, the theme and subject matter were of epic proportions. More writing of this genre, this incestual nature, will be greatly appreciated by any readers of your efforts. Keep up the good work!!
i am still hard and cumming to it i have been since chapter 1
This has got to be one of the best stories i have ever read. I was hard from ch.1 and cumming all the way through!
Very, very erotic! Nice when you can end up with a happy ending.
More of this please
I liked the story as a whole and cummed twice during it. A great story and hope more are on their way!!!
Sexy and loving
brilliant story my mum caught me reading this and saw my erection and now we make love whenever we can
this is the best story by far ever written
Very well written story. I´m so very hooked on incest stories, brother-sister, son-mother, father-daughter. Even grandfather- granddaughters. My favorite...
I found it great, until he entered his sis for the first time without foreplay, or any prep. That was a letdown!
A very nice story, a little hard to believe but quite an exhilarating plot that we can all dream about. What a dream, BOTH MOTHER & SISTER, almost makes one want to dream all the time. Thank You!!!!
This is by far my favorite story that i have read so far on this sight... it is a beautiful literary peace and i encorurage you with all my might to keep writing ... it would suit you well as a career... Thank you Thank you Very Much...
it was a beautiful love story coupled with hot incest. if this were a movie id watch it .well done and hopefully more like this to come. thank you gor sharing this story
Yes it is a good story, Reminds me of whne I first did my sis then later did my Step Mom, I am sti9ll doing my sis when ever my wife and I see her during a vist, we want sis to move in with us, we are in our late 60's sis is 62, still love good hot sex:)
Keep them coming.
A well balanced story, as one was reading, one became apart of it.
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