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Thinking like a Star

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/13/06

you

just need to look in the mirror and see your starry reflection...big sigh...blue

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by LeBroz12/13/06

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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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starry nights...

can make your soul soar!

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by duddle14612/14/06

Mystic.

A beautiful poem...with such an ethereal beauty. The innumerable thoughts like stars light up our creative sparks to fan the flames of creativity.

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by Liar12/15/06

Excellent title

Good poem.

I get the feeling that you could have done more with it though. Maybe if you omitted the direct star mentions in the poem. It's such a strong title that it would hold that metaphor on it's own.

Anyway, I'm nitpiucking. This is one of your better ones. Keep em coming.

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