just need to look in the mirror and see your starry reflection...big sigh...blue
This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.
can make your soul soar!
A beautiful poem...with such an ethereal beauty. The innumerable thoughts like stars light up our creative sparks to fan the flames of creativity.
I get the feeling that you could have done more with it though. Maybe if you omitted the direct star mentions in the poem. It's such a strong title that it would hold that metaphor on it's own.
Anyway, I'm nitpiucking. This is one of your better ones. Keep em coming.
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