All Comments on 'Vegas-In-Law'

Extend the vacation from 3 days to 6. Or, make this into a series where they meet when they get home.

...although it contained enough grammatical errors to be rather distracting, but when you went from her ass to her pussy without any regard to the raging yeast infection that would ALWAYS cause, I began to have serious doubts that you had any idea what you were doing. You just screwed yourself our of three more great days/nights of fucking! What a stupid idea!

..ass while in Vagas.

Isn't that exciting?

Hardly.

What if she needed to "pretend" to be your wife to win something? Just a thought.

I felt you could've added more detail. It was pretty good, but too general.

Hot and believable story! But don't put it in her pussy after her ass; that's rude. :-) Otherwise, I was picturing my own sister-in-law and enjoying the scenes. Keep it up!

I changed her name in my head and substituted the name of my sister-in-law. Even though this was already a good read, it made the story 10x better for me.

My wife wants us to go to Vegas this summer, and for her sister to come along with us. Now this story will be stuck in my mind forever!

When?

Why haven't you continued after your very good start in both your stories?

Thanks, love passed-out stories.

Thirteen years ago??!?? No comment.