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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/27/06

LOVE

LOVE IT!! PLEASE CONTINUE!

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by Anonymous12/27/06

Great job

Wow,
I am at a loss for words here. I loved it!

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by Anonymous12/27/06

Wheeewwww!!!!!

Please continue this story. It is hot!

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by another_girl12/27/06

Keep it up!

This is a great start - can't wait to read more!

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by Anonymous02/09/07

HOT!

i really need you to finish this story!!!!
i've been waiting for a long time!!!!!!!!!!!

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by darkknight0109/01/07

Bringing the reader to a boil

Honeywldcat,

This is a hot beginning, you had me hooked with the line "abent-mindedly stroking a piece of silk. It made him ache to feel her hands stroking him." Then you bring the reader to a slow simmer just waiting to boil over. I can't wait to read the next part.

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by msjay12306/24/08

LOVE LOVE LOOOOOOOVED IT

PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEEAAAAASSSSEEEE hurry on the next chapter! I'm dying to read more!!!

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by Anonymous02/21/10

loved it and...

glad u updated it after 4 years!!!LOL

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by kitten082902/21/10

In absolute agreement

with the first comment, that was a hot story and so glad u wrote a part two hopefully we won't have to wait another four years for part three :) lol

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by luv_romance02/22/10

hot!!!

wow!! this is hot!!! more please.

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by inspirixis04/26/10

Whoo-hoo

It is hot in here? Am I sitting in a sauna?

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by Ropetease04/29/10

is it warm in here

wow, ok hot is the only word to explain this.

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by StarofAirdrie06/29/10

Beyond Hot

My title says it all... wow!

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by cannd07/26/10

wow, one of the hottest stories i've read in a while despite there not being sex involved. If these two have so much chemistry talking to each other , can't imagine whats to come. I love the game they played in the beginning pretending to know each other. great stuff

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by jazz1308/31/10

More!!!

Please don't make us wait another 3 months before we get a new chapter!!!
You are writing such an exciting story I can't wait to find out what next!!!

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by Gemgrl_7211/08/11

Where is part 2?

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