This is a hot beginning, you had me hooked with the line "abent-mindedly stroking a piece of silk. It made him ache to feel her hands stroking him." Then you bring the reader to a slow simmer just waiting to boil over. I can't wait to read the next part.
wow, one of the hottest stories i've read in a while despite there not being sex involved. If these two have so much chemistry talking to each other , can't imagine whats to come. I love the game they played in the beginning pretending to know each other. great stuff
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LOVE
LOVE IT!! PLEASE CONTINUE!
Great job
Wow,
I am at a loss for words here. I loved it!
Wheeewwww!!!!!
Please continue this story. It is hot!
Keep it up!
This is a great start - can't wait to read more!
HOT!
i really need you to finish this story!!!!
i've been waiting for a long time!!!!!!!!!!!
Bringing the reader to a boil
Honeywldcat,
This is a hot beginning, you had me hooked with the line "abent-mindedly stroking a piece of silk. It made him ache to feel her hands stroking him." Then you bring the reader to a slow simmer just waiting to boil over. I can't wait to read the next part.
LOVE LOVE LOOOOOOOVED IT
PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEEAAAAASSSSEEEE hurry on the next chapter! I'm dying to read more!!!
loved it and...
glad u updated it after 4 years!!!LOL
In absolute agreement
with the first comment, that was a hot story and so glad u wrote a part two hopefully we won't have to wait another four years for part three :) lol
hot!!!
wow!! this is hot!!! more please.
Whoo-hoo
It is hot in here? Am I sitting in a sauna?
is it warm in here
wow, ok hot is the only word to explain this.
Beyond Hot
My title says it all... wow!
wow, one of the hottest stories i've read in a while despite there not being sex involved. If these two have so much chemistry talking to each other , can't imagine whats to come. I love the game they played in the beginning pretending to know each other. great stuff
More!!!
Please don't make us wait another 3 months before we get a new chapter!!!
You are writing such an exciting story I can't wait to find out what next!!!
Where is part 2?
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