All Comments on 'The Exchange Student'

Please get an editor. I really enjoyed your story, but, the missed words in the paragraphs made it very hard to read. Other than that the story was great and I would like to see more chapters of this story.

I wholly agree that this story needs a good editing for punctuation and spelling at least. The theme was nice, but when it came right down to what should have been the start of all the action, it got very rushed and jumbled and then just abruptly ended. Develop the theme, describe the sex in detail, have some real dialogue.

Please continue the story. I have often fantasized about exchange students ever since my high school days and the big titted blond who was the exchange student I DO know about was very HOT!

The primise was good but the story was poorly executed.

Sad

??? People cheating and some incest but mostly how stupid people slow to catching up

Get someone to edit your work!