All Comments on 'Saturday Seduction'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good, but too short

This was a good story, but jumped around some making it a bit hard to follow. Also, it was too short, ending just as a reader gets into the story. Still and good start and could be really good with a bit more effort.

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