All Comments on 'The Pit of the Nine Sisters'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
boring

boring

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
very hot

very hot indeed!

ZebanZebanabout 13 years ago
Disappointing ending

I think you could have taken this story further instead of stopping the way you did. Great beginning and middle though.

Thomas99Thomas99almost 11 years ago
I agree with Zedan

it finished like it was cut off from the rest of the story

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