All Comments on 'A Blowjob'

Can't believe that no one has reviewed this over the last five years. The imagery was very nice but my only complaint was that there was not enough of it.

It has been years since I've enjoyed a blow job and never have I heard the pleasure so lovingly described.

reely lovd ur linez.. it gave me d feeel ! ! ;>

I couldn't have said it better. Great poem!

Great rhyming! While my reading my cock gets hard and throbbing as if is being sucked!

I am so wet now. Also it makes me wanna give a blowjob to anyone.

I love rhyming poems and yours is nice......BUT, have someone edit before you submit. Incorrect usage detracts from the pleasure of the picutres your words paint.

nice! I am so licking my lips right now.

Good pacing and use of rhyme, only one of which was a bit forced. You have a good ear for meter.

Holy crap thank you I just masturbated it got me so hard thank you

keep it up pay no attention to critics

That's a dirty slut that made my cock hard

You poem kept the rhyme going,

even as my cock kept growing,

images of those sucking lips,

yielded dreams of cuffs and whips,

perhaps you will stop and deny me,

then turn about and even tie me,

hold my face with thigh and leg,

Don't let go until I beg.

Ride my face; there is no haste,

Let me enjoy your sweet taste.

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Excellent Job!

I got harder and harder as I read.! Well Done!

Great cadence and rhythm. Naughty piece that works. :)

This was terrible.

The use of language and rhyming makes it a pleasant read!

Wow, that made me cum first time reading through. Great detail

There's a certain gusto to her anticipation. Well done!

1971 gave her first BJ to her boss to keep her job!!

1972 gave a Greek some head before he did her ass

1973 gave an NBA star some head with ice in her mouth

1974 gave her lover head daily

1975 gave the twins Rob & Ron their birthday head

They say a vision should be

This poem inspired me to start writing erotic poetry of my own. Thank you for your the vivid images and steady rhyme structure. The poem gets me hard by the ending makes me lose it every time.

Thought it was great