All Comments on 'Chance Encounter Ch. 03'

That is one hell of a way to end that series. WOW!

I LOVED it but I was so confused by his name!! In the first one the security guard called him Mike. In the second one his sister called him David. In the third when he was is the ambulance he was John. It was soooooooo good but confusing!!!

Very excelent. I liked the morning wake up most. Until the hospital scene... I cant help but wonder when the next one will be out

It needs another chapter.

But otherwise it was good !

Rapier

I got confused with the name changes your style varies sometimes between first and third person narrative with little punctuation . All that aside I am enjoying this unique tale of happenstance.

I enjoyed the story but I was confused as it was supposedly a continuation of the Chance encounter series. The series seem to be very disjoint with separate story lines. Further, there are many open issues. Additional chapters would be great and hopefully all of these open pathways could be connected and closed