by oggbashan
Wow! This is one of my favorite of your stories (up there with Her Pink Quilted Coat). I love the complete and utter lack of control on the hero's part. Here's hoping for a part 3!
Good premise continues.
Too short.
It's as if you think there's a prize for the most chapters, even if each chapter is only a few paragraphs long.
Needs more details. JUst saying she rubber her silk pantied crotch on his chest doe a while doesn't cut the mustard.
Three stars.