All Comments on 'Gill'

What a twist! And written in the style of Old Erotica tales circa the turn of the century (the details are up to date though). Where did you get the inspiration from?

A bit of a stretch but perhaps believable. Moreso was the quality of writing which put life in the possibility.

Nice work writer - better in plot and reality and respect than the others.

Gill sacrifices for dear old Dad. Turns into some very hot intense erotic activities.

Excellent, really enjoyed it.