All Comments on 'What a Job Ch. 01'

by steviet

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
A good start

Sounds like the start of a good adventure. I hope you let her have some more fun.

The usual negative comments have already started to trickle in from the peanut gallery so you know that you have written an exciting short story that should be continued

oldfart4funoldfart4funalmost 17 years ago
I like it!!

Good job, can't wait for CH.02. Keep up the good work

HardFeltHardFeltover 11 years ago
Why

How come cheating is fashionable?

ken philipsken philipsabout 10 years ago
This was such a great start

Whatever happened to the rest? In fact, author made a lot of good starts only not to continue. Our loss.

sandmanbobsandmanbobabout 9 years ago
Continue the story

I loved the story and would like to see you add more chapters to it.

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