All Comments on 'Muses'

by Lauren Hynde

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normal jeannormal jeanabout 17 years ago
!!!

so luck is outta luck!!

you list this as non erotic, well, I found it rather intoxicating and woman, you're on fire!!

thoroughly enjoyed the pace of this one and the commanding tone. very well done, Ms Hynde

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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The muses have heard you in this hot-blooded write.

Saw this on the 30/30 thread and immediately thought,

This should be posted for all to see ~

A real poem for the survivor realm;

Now all you need do is get your 30/30 ticket punched.

And I'll concur here, this is one really hot nonerotic piece, going from an appeal to the muses to finding the lover with qualities you seek.

TzaraTzaraabout 17 years ago
Did Euterpe herself help you?

I really like this one. My only question is about "chromatic, atonal, pentatonic songs". I'm not a musician, but I would have thought "chromatic" and "pentatonic" would be mutually exclusive.

Really good poem.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
light bits of light

to allure in the mystic muses...nicely penned...blue

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Intense

Erotic and sensual ~ passionate in purpose.

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