All Comments on 'Mother In Law'

This sounds like an 8th grade submission to Penthouse Forum.

Needs some work, but keep it up.

great story keep the great work up

I could easy adjust to a situation like that.

Good stuff

Adding the daughter had sex with the father was enough. You could have grown that into the threesome and a switch for the husband. Mother in law would be second fiddle to the wife while he was the pivot person for their desire.

Great story just wish you had continued with the wife/daughter three some !!!!!!

Good until the end. Wrecked a good story.

Take no notice of the anonymous criticism - great story line - well done!

It was great until the end