All Comments on 'Family'

try using spell check and rereading before you submit

that is what you need for a good sex party.

You need to have someone who is proficient in vocabulary and spelling proofread your work before you submit it. It's very distracting to try to read a story with so many errors in it.

Family sex is the best there is. I began with fucking my sister and from their went to sucking and giving my ass to my father. Early on it became clear that I was destined to become the family cum slut whore and i did just that. I loved to give my mouth and ass to others while there were others watching me and waiting their turn to use me. I could never get enough cock or pussy to satisfy my needs.

Thanks for writing. I know what effort it takes and I appreciate you sharing. I stopped reading after the fourth paragraph. I would have kept on reading if you had written this in first person or any other style than you did.

I'm not trying to be an ass. I do appreciate your work and your sharing. I'm moving on now and will find a story that is more to my liking.

This is a reasonable story made “not good” by the number of spelling mistakes and

the poor grammar. Needs a proof read prior to submission.

I lived it I wanked hard and licked up all of my cum

Not a bad story, but you need to either read it through yourself to alter all the errors or get someone else to do it for you.