All Comments on 'Desperado'

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x0xF0RC3DPL3ASUR3x0xF0RC3DPL3ASUR3almost 15 years ago
Can this even be called a story?

Wayyyy too short. I could have written this in 5 minutes or probably less. Kind of a lame plot to boot. Typical. Generic. Common. Grow some creativity.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Where is the rest. What happen during and after the zipper came down

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
quickie

I think he ejaculated right after and that was it...what an idiot..

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