All Comments on 'Brand New Girlfriend'

by JakeRivers

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HarddaysknightHarddaysknightabout 17 years ago
I know the song!

This was a fun little story, much like the song. Living well is always the best revenge!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
A Great Little Short Story!

What I liked most was the idea that someone who would be successful person (not a loser) has other options if their partner decides to stray. Too many stories on this site have the otherwise successful husband or boyfriend languish waiting for the cheating spouse to come back or reconcil with her.

SleeplessinMD

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyabout 17 years ago
Nice

It was a cute read, but a tad difficult to follow, all in all though not bad and I love that song, as much as I like the one where the chick carves her name in the guys leather seats of his SUV. ;) ~ Red

Nightowl22Nightowl22about 17 years ago
Don't know the song but good story.

I thought it fit "Be careful what you ask for, you just might get it."

I am still wondering just why she had to go fuck the corvette.

Liked that ending.

DG HearDG Hearabout 17 years ago
Hey good Buddy!

Cute little tale. Don't know the song, send it to me. I Always read your stories and have yet to be disappointed.

Big Fan and fellow writer.

DG Hear

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 17 years ago
Joey will not sing here anymore…

I see a unifying theme between you works. But it does feel good to laugh at it!

BTW, what a great way to be inspired: pick an inspiring song, and take it from there… I mean, how bad can it be? I know, if it just was that simple.

Well, you and HDK make for a respectable company in that regard.

Risq_001Risq_001about 17 years ago
Never heard the song, liked the story

<p>I loved this short story.</p>

<p>Specially these lines:</p>

<P><i>Man, I felt like a kid again. I did spend a few minutes thinking about Candy ... or was it Candie. Who cares? I've got a brand new girlfriend.</i></p>

<p>I about fell out of my chair laughing</P>

<p>Nice story</p>

-Risq

DesertPirateDesertPirateabout 17 years ago
Confused

I guess HDK and I are the only ones besides yourself that listen to Country music. Great story Jake, Jack, whoever. I honestlyu think most of the men I have ever met wished they had done something similar at some point in the past. This was fun and since that was your intention, you succeeded big time! Thanks for the laughs. I can't believe I didn't post something the first time I read this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
look keep writing your stories your way

good stories are hard to fine,so tell the negative commentors there isn't no wimps here.keep writing strong male stories for the sissyboy writers make me puke.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
See video

For another perspective watch the video on this song. It is one of the funniest I have ever seen.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
High Marks for a strong independant man...

Sure he was lame as a boyfriend... Lots of us are. I just chuckled the way you handled his "mourning" his breakup! So I give it high marks, why the hell not?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
She wanted space and they are still living togethe

r? Get real, if she said that to me either she or I would out of there in 60 minutes. Once had a girl I was dating tell me we should date others. Dont know what she did, we never spoke to each other again after than sentence. Had a girl I was dating once go out to a club before coming to my house that night to fuck. Told her to take her panties off so I could check her first, she got mad. Never spoke to her again either. Women can be so very stupid.

Stoneage9Stoneage9over 15 years ago
Enjoy your submissions.

Jake, I don't guess I'm smart enough to enjoy your Humor. I have now finished all your submissions. I really got into some of your stories,some I've read several times and some I've read only twice. I liked the plots and think you are a very gifted writer as long as you stay away from humor. The twists and turns in the stories have been really good. I have enjoyed your military comments and insights in Army life. I count you as my favorite writer at the time. DGH was on top, but I think I like you stories better. Keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Take It

For what it was, just fun, thanks.

TavadelphinTavadelphinover 10 years ago
Papa's got a brand new bag -

Lol - fun - Candy pants wanted to fuck around and make him work for what should be his - cool -

Now he has the fun and she is looking for Mr Goodbar all over again - be careful what you ask for you might get it -

Dubby49Dubby49almost 9 years ago
Hilarious

I loved the conversation with the game going.

PS. I'm listening to the song as I read.

bruce22bruce22over 8 years ago
Nicely Woven Tapestry

Smooth hook up, but he did seem a bit of it!

SomeOneTwoThreeSomeOneTwoThreeover 6 years ago
Lots of fun.

I love the song!

The music video is fun too.

I really like how the lyric is

put into a story here!

It will take some time to vipe

the grin off my face.

Top rating from me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hard to follow, good start but.......

Hard to follow, good start but lost me 1/2 way through!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Too fun

Thanks. Another cuck free zone!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Got a lot better at the end

I know the story was mostly meant to be taken in a humorous light but in the beginning of the story I had zero sympathy for Joe. Doesn't matter that they weren't in love with one another, it doesn't even matter that she's a cheating slut, if you're with someone you don't just ignore them and take them for granted. Thankfully after that opening sequence the story got a lot better. Dora was cute as hell and he's a lucky man for getting back together with her. It was pretty sweet, him being able to tell Candy (Candie?) where she could go. Despite the rough beginning this is one of my favorite JR stories. Nicely done.

Grimjack01Grimjack01over 4 years ago
Brain dead

Fun little story but this guy was brain dead. Solid 4 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

She said she needed SPACE, and he gave it to her. Tell the bitch to go to hell...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Take that bitch!! LOVE YOUR STORIES!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Maybe we would all benefit from stepping back once in a while to re-evaluate what we consider to be love.

More often than not, we're probably simply feeling lust or infatuation, which tend to fade with familiarity and the passage of time.

DeanofMeanDeanofMeanover 1 year ago

loved that 100% btb and nothing crazy had to happen

PikaGelionPikaGelionabout 1 month ago

Pity the next guy Candy gets with.

If they had gotten married instead of a date w Mr. Fancy Yellow Car would we be looking at "February Sucks" down the road?

Short, concise, memorable, especially all those "But baby...!"

Thanks for sharing

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