All Comments on 'Softly, She Treads Ch. 01'

Well done, and I look forward to the story developing.

Outstanding storyline, written with true style. Please continue with further installments!

... to a tale which can be developed into a well written novel. Ms. Jonah has done a wonderful job of setting the basis for a continuation of this entertaining tale. I can not wait to read about the further exploits that await the characters in 'Softly, She Treads'. I found it quite easy to put myself in the main character's place. Thank you Xy for delivering a very well written tome.

It's actually a complete short, originally written in ten "chapters", but broken into four parts for Literotica. The other three have already been approved, and will be published over the next few days.

I hope you continue to enjoy this tale. I have to admit, it's one of my favourite pieces of work, written for the Loveliest Man I'll Never Meet.

Watch out for the ending, though! *winks*

A mystery woman, a return to the primitive state as this story starts getting interesting right from the very start. Looking forward to seeing how this Writer continues to develop this story. Enjoyable Reading.

Enjoying the start. Wonder where we'll go...

can't wait to read part 2