by XyJonah
... has left me desirous of the balence of the story. Once again, Ms. Jonah has left me wanting more. I must say that her own comment that she left following the first installment of 'Softly, She Treads' has aroused my curiousity. I look forward to the next installment.
Thank you again for providing a well written tale which continues to evolve. Ms. Johnah, you are a very gifted person in that your words leap off the page and into my head.
THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!
This wonderful story of castaways on an island is quite believable. I love the detail descriptions of the island, allowing the readers to picture it almost as if they were there. Looking forward to the next installment. Enjoyable Read.
Beautiful "pictures" ~ details of sorroundings and details of human emotions ~ Looking forward for more.
Hester needs to learn to direct his energy at constructive activity and effort. He will be more functional in the long run and be able to contribute to living.