I think when you write about Russian whores you should write in Russian. Not that I don't want read stories like this but your English just isn't good enough.
I'm an author of that and I can tell you my english is good enough, I'm certficated by British Council. I want to say I write in English, not American!!!!!!! Try to put many juicy phrases in english, but it's too hard to do that. I make less mistakes than many stories I wrote here. To tell the truth, 3 editors from literotica edit my stories before releazing them. If you want to et in touch me my ICQ is 310370930 and my e-mail is email@example.com
Чувак забей на тупых пиндосов. еще перед ними оправдываться не хватало.
А рассказ прикольный, мне понравился
There will be many chapters of that long-termed story if you gimme your suggestion!!!!! I think about 50)))) Originally It was made up of a girl of 14, but admins didn't like that age and something more. What about my language I can tell you one thing: I submit a story entittled as White dance, but I wanted to improve it and sent it to some my editor. The editted version was rejected due to three reason. About lexicology, grammar, spelling and vocabulary I repeat again they are my active ones!!! I don't use any on-line dictionaries and so on. But I believe my english will be better, because I'm revising my english now.
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