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A wave you are...

byLauren Hynde©
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by LeBroz01/18/07

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I usually save , as I did here, a Lauren poem to the end, both to just enjoy it and because it will normally be the most challenging piece of the day. This poem is no exception and as I read it I sometimes felt like I was reading two poems at once. And the eroticism is very much there, can't miss it.

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by duddle14601/18/07

Special.

Once in a while you will find a word grouping that is altogether lovely. This poem contains such a sequence. So beautiful.

and so I love you as the waters
and the waves the sands
that possess them.

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by vampiredust01/18/07

Lyrical

I love the way this poem flows on the tongue. Great imagery and depth, much enjoyed.

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by colddiesel01/18/07

Aqueous

I like this very much.The selection of words like waves,wash, mud, move,waters, dissolve, ocean, sands give the poem a texture(feel) in adddition to the bare meaning of the words.

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by Anonymous01/18/07

where's da showers?

cos I need a cold one. Delicious, Lauren. Thank you.

tess

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by Amyfriend01/19/07

Powerful and deep...

...affects and moves the emotions.

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by normal jean01/20/07

breathless and

more then erotic, it feels like love and acceptance. Probably one of your very best Lauren, and you have so many bests, but this one is... Its going into my faves

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