All Comments on 'A New and Delicate Balance Ch. 09'

Yes remember... we just dont care.Of course now that

PHIL is dead ERIC and Irene can get back together ... right? even if she was lying about her Liis to ERIC and fucked PHIL several times...

spence the writer is going to make a woman out eric,thank god for mary.

Again, well written. But unlikely a sub would get up the nerve to do what Mary does to Phil. But let's say she does. Pretty sicko to do the necrophilia thing. She actually gets excited and orgasms while she is killing her husband, maybe again when he has already died! This is possible to imagine for a dom but not for a sub. Another issue: when a relatively "young" man dies during sex, there will always be a post-mortem examination to determine the cause of death. While there are "poisons" that can simulate a heart attack, they are detectable in a toxicology screen. And the coroner is likely to be suspicious with the punctures on Phil's skin from the thorns (when he unthinkingly rolled off Mary and got stuck). The first thing to be checked would be circulating levels of lots of different things. Phil's law firm friends will also be suspicious. But Mary is pretty crazy (I'd say certifiable) and she would probably get off on an insanity plea, even if caught. Very tragic and poignant but I have trouble with the unreality of it. I hope Eric does not commit suicide next, but I would not be too surprised if he does. The way he drowns in his alcohol and always gives up rather than fighting or bouncing back from his problems, all he would need is a small mistep and his pain will be over for good. I rate this a 50% due to the excellent writing, otherwise it would be a lower score. Please wrap this up so you can start another story, hopefully one with a more tenable plot.

To bad Mary did the wimps dirty work for him. Phil checked out way to easy, now Eric the wimp has no chance for redemption, and will forever be haunted by Phils ghost, especialy if he is stupid enough to take the slut wife & little bastard back. (Even if the child is Eric's, Irene will never truely be Eric's again)

you are quite simply AMAZING....

I never saw this coming at all. I just hope that she doesn't go after Irene now. I hope that Irene and Eric can now start the slow process of mending and putting their marriage back together with Eric's child in her belly.

Hopefully Mary checks into a hospital (yeah right!)

Thanks for posting so quick each time, am checking each and every night for many more chapters to yet come.

Ok, Phil the asshole is dead, Mary is a off in left field. Eric is a complete wimp since day 1 and Irene has left for L.A. to hopefully deliver a baby because the temptation to be around someone like Phil is to much to handle in New York or any other place for that matter. Is reconcillation possible between wimpy Eric and slut-wife Irene? Hmmm, does it depend on whose kid it is? Eric's or Phil's? Obviously, DNA testing has not been invented yet otherwise we know that the forecoming child indeed belongs to wimpy Eric. All in all, the good news might be that Eric is not only a wimp but a "minority wimp" as well. Great to see the a reversal of the normal bullshit protrayed in these interracial

stories. Suspenseful and emotional piece of work by this author - hats off for such an effort.

Now that PHIL is dead.... HERE COME THE FORCED RECONCILIATION TRAIN AT ALL COSTS..... does anyone douBt that............ 1) Irene was fucking PHIL alot more than one time?........... 2) ERIC takes Irene back and keeps her even AFTER he finds out she lied and lied again and again about her involvment with PHIL but since he's dead everything is ok right???...... 3) the baby is really's PHIL...

that was the best description of what demented person thinks. i used to have thoughts like that. not fun but it keeps you alive from day to day. well written, as usual. i had goosebumps reading this story. if Mary can get away w/ it, SHE IS NOW ONE RICH CRAZY (legally) BITCH.

1) yes

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2) don't remember; maybe. Is it important?

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3) no

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What is this train you're talking about? There's no train in this story.

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I agree with the previous poster: this chapter does a fine job of showing us Mary The Wacko. I wonder how come Harry didn't lambast her for killing Phil when he threatened to divorce her? It seems to me that's a lot worse than committing adultery but then again maybe that's due to this train fixation.

He came from hell, he goes to hell. RIP Phil, not a real happy end, but a little satisfaction.

understand the attitude of some of the people who comment,I think the wholr story has been great.

I cannot wait for the next segment.

Phil is dealt with in a very appropriate manner. Now we will see where the story goes from here. Is Mary as sick as she appears to be, or will this sweet parting heal her to some degree?

A woman MURDERS her "lover" while poisening him and having sex with him and that’s what the crazy guy(s) of Literotica put at the top of their crazed reading recommendation? PLEASE someone put a stop to it.

I just feel sad about the path you chose. Nothing subtle certainly not delicate in the story. It’s all about the worst type of mind numbing escapist soap like material, only hardened by drugs and alcohol and murder. You got it all except as I said any touch with delicate and subtle story. Like increased tolerance to drugs, the more extreme the props you drop on us the less the story shows of your writing. It’s apparently much easier to go to formulaic and histrionic writing than to portray the subtleties of people’s lives, those we can identify around us, not in La La land.

It may not be a perfect story, and may not by exceptionally well written, but you've got to give the author credit for breaking out of the mould cast by all the other cheating wife stories seen on this site.

thank you

not worth even commenting, but anyone that can call "seriously" this story a good story is either drunk or has no taste. At least there used to be some writer skills now they have gone down the drain.

This story is sinking fast. There's no writing talent being displayed whatsoever.

These two are meant for each other. Angiquesophie, you are one of the best writers on this site. Don't always care for the storyline, but your ability is unquestioned. This story is very good however.

He deserved much worse, a long agonizing death, perhaps.

This would have been a great short story. But it still a good read. Thanks for sharing.

This series has gone from decent to fair to bad to horrible

Thankfully only one ch. left..

the other should really be careful of what may happen. TK U MLJ LV NV

I was rooting for him to die, a sure sign that your story pulled me in deeply. It's proof that I can both love and hate the story and the characters that inhabit it.

For wiping that turd off the bathroom floor level of the household of humanity. Now if such could be the fate of Elaine?

Now I know that none of you perpetual twelve year olds have any business or estate experience. But there is now a fortune in play.

And the only two inheritors in sight are Crazy Mary as the inconsolable widow and the possibility that Irene's baby will prove to have been fathered by Phil.

At that level of wealth there are all sorts of interlocking trusts and properties. All infested with a swarm of lawyers and investment managers and senior executives and directors and all the other vermin who parasitize our Corporate State.

Let the games begin!

Congrats. Four out of five. Nicely done. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. Now the big question is can you save Eric?

holy crap! Love the complexity of this tale and the amazing character development. What a surprising chapter. Five stars.

She sent her viking off to Valhalla. Lol. Great idea.

... three to go. Or three and a half?

Man,has mousy Mary changed from when she was 1st introduced! From a do-gooder, inner city,savior,to a pain-loving slave,and finally a kinky Goth murderer!

(Rumor has it that after this story,Mary was signed to a 3 movie deal with Lifetime TV,the man-haters channel!)

Seems as though the poison sold to Mary by the ghetto voodoo queen is untraceable after it stops a heart. (Irene is lucky she moved 3,000 miles away to LA!)

Thank you so much for sharing this story. You are a truly talented writer.

you are very welcome.

now onto brilliant.

Sucks

Perfect villain she is.

It is one thing to ask for a divorce but Phil was over the top cruel in the manner he treated Mary.

Then again, Mary was crazy as a lunatic. They deserved each other.

Thank you. It needed to be done.

Ah, true love.

Well, it's about time. He really needed killing.

"Nevermore." Such an evocation. A masterful touch!!!!

Five stars for this chapter. Always good to see Justice served.

She was pregnant but she still had wine .?

steep price for a divorce, LOL

Well, that was creepily bizarre

You need serious psychiatric help

Degenerated into a half-baked soap opera, “The Edge of Wetness.” If that was the goal, then author has succeeded beyond all expectations.

This is really getting to be bizarre.

Well, at least something good happened in this extended mess!

This girl, " Master" are both psychopaths