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by MungoParkIII

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Good piece here, remembering 1938.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in Monday's New Poems Reviews.

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Interesting ...

very interesting...

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
remembrance

A gentle reminder ~ of an unspeakable time.

MyNecroticSnailMyNecroticSnailabout 17 years ago
I'm tempted

to fuck around with the last stanza. As it is, it looks slightly overdone. Maybe a space between remember/remember, remember,(no space)remember. I don't know.

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