by TE999
Very well written and hot! I enjoyed it very much. Good luck in the contest!
a nice blend of love,submission and pain. It was sweet and without excess. Keep writing. This was enjoyable
BDSM, is not my normal cup of tea, But,I promised you I would read it and for people who like this type of story, it was very well written, hence the 5 vote.
I always try to be honest in my comments
DG Hear
What a nice surprise! There should be more BDSM for Valentine's day.
Good luck in the contest!
Maharat
Loved it. All the details of what Janie was thinking . . . perfect. And I liked the little twist at the end, showing equality and love. Well done.
I read and enjoyed your Valentine's Day story. I liked the romance between the characters which led into the more intense things later on. Good job.
TE you write so well. I liked as a previous reader has noted the mix of romance juxtapositioned with the administration of pain. It did not matter whether they were the same sex or opposite, it worked so well. You have a great style that I am beginning to appreciate as I read more and more of your stories.
Peter Grimm