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touchingly beautiful
this was so lovely thankyou
Great
Absolutely Fantastic. A real romance story yet no-erotic and I had to read it through. Very well done, a real winner in my book. I'll gladly sign my name to the comment.
DG Hear
Dancing into happiness
That's a good way to pass into the next existence.
I enjoyed the by-play about the cat, doing what cats do best.
Og
Very sweet
What a lovely story!
A poignant tale
Sad and sweet. Wonderful imagery. The cat was a nice touch. Good luck in the contest.
Great story!
I loved it, a sweet story, tender and succinct. Good luck in the contest!
brought tears to my eyes
I'd give it a "6" if I could. Loved the inclusion of the little kitty. Do keep writing, please.
What
a wonderful story.
so touching
I think this is what heaven will be like
We can all hope
Rachlou,
We can all hope that it will be this way when the time comes. Damn you write a great story. Thanks!
Rach, beautifully done.
A love throughout time, so wonderful. Good luck in the contest. You've got my vote.
Forever.
A sweet evocative endearing story. One that is tragic but at the same time reassuring. Rachlou once again has written a character into her story that summons up so many emotions ~ all of them good. Terrific Write. Enjoyable read.
Very Moving & Flowing - The Waterworks That Is
Authoress - you have a special touch to move emotions regardless of age.
Thanks
With Very High Regard
Very Nice Romance
Concise; flows well. I like the cat.
Yeah,
I know. Men aren't supposed to cry.
Beautiful
Beautiful and moving - good luck in the contest!
Moving
Very moving, Rach. A really well done, sentimental piece, good luck in the contest.
Good one
That was such a sweet, peaceful read. Good luck in the contest.
thank you for this lovely sweet story
Very touching, evocative, and peaceful.
Good luck in the contest!
Maharat
Beautifully told
A wonderfully touching story, Rach. You've captured her life, her love, her longings and evoked such a heartfelt reaction in readers.
Exquisite
even though I got a sneak peak, I still loved reading this again. The cat was a great touch, adding a little levity to the story. Excellent story, Rach, as always.
Absolute beauty
An intense story of real love. Your imagery is so tangible, I felt like I could reach out and touch Oliver's fur, feel his warm little cat-body. The flow of words is smooth, and and rich, and deliciously sad.
Simply a beautiful story. A treasure. Thank you for writing it.
Endearing...
sigh....I'm a closet romantic. Such beautiful imagery, it filled the senses, moved gracefully as a dance itself, bittersweet and beautiful.
Abstruse.
Wonderful...
A beautifully written story. Just wow! There is doubt that you are a true writer. Good luck in the contest.
It is time for a W
to go on your Lit author page to contrast with the red "H" that is next to so many of your stories.
This is excellent. Moving. One of the best reads I have had. I am grateful that your story ended up under my cursor.
Thank you.
kb
I think I'm ...
getting more sentimental. Beautiful stories such as this one will make that happen. All my kitties say "Hi!" to Oliver. Phil
Okay.......
It isn't enough that you're stunningly beautiful, you have to be a fantastic writer too? I give in, I give up! You had me at "Dust motes dances in the air like tiny fairies"! :)
Oh My....
You made me cry!
I mean, really cry!!
And I cried buckets for ages over this!!!
It was amazing, I wish I could write things like this.
I hope you won't mind me adding it as my favourite or printing it off?
(Every now and then I like to cry. And in my line of work it helps to let it all out as it were.)
Thank you so much.
That was a wonderful story
That was a wonderful story but it pisses me off that I knew the ending as soon as she looked at herself in the mirror.
Still, the imagery was beautiful. I could not only see her, I could feel Eleanor.
Now, I'm going to have to read more of your stuff. Unfortunately, when I am writing I never read. My writing must be coming to an end, now that I am reading.
I kind of feel like the wicked witch, "I'm melting."
Thanks for a wonderful story that was beautifully crafted.
A Beautiful story.
It should be a happy theme since Eleanor is so happy but I feel like Jessie, so sad.. Wonderfully told story.. A tear-jerker but wonderfully told.
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So beautifully, hauntingly sad... Yet lovely.
I do not have the talent
to be able to comment adequately on this story. Wonderfully imagined, and so poured into our minds. :-)
Go for it!!
Roger
Thank You
... for the beautifully touching story. So far it's the best contest entry I've read.
Oh, rach
No points off for it, but this seems awfully derivative – think "Titanic" LOL! Oh heck, that story was probably derivative as well. Also, it was pretty predictable, and consequently lacked a certain amount of 'punch'
THOUGHTS FROM THE EDGE AND BEYOND
AND NOW THE LONG DARK WAIT FOR OTHERS TO APPEAR. tk u mlj lv nv
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