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The Last Dance

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by Anonymous

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by dreamcatcher701/22/07

touchingly beautiful

this was so lovely thankyou

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by DG Hear01/22/07

Great

Absolutely Fantastic. A real romance story yet no-erotic and I had to read it through. Very well done, a real winner in my book. I'll gladly sign my name to the comment.
DG Hear

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by oggbashan01/22/07

Dancing into happiness

That's a good way to pass into the next existence.

I enjoyed the by-play about the cat, doing what cats do best.

Og

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by capricious_chic01/22/07

Very sweet

What a lovely story!

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by TE99901/22/07

A poignant tale

Sad and sweet. Wonderful imagery. The cat was a nice touch. Good luck in the contest.

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by past_perfect01/22/07

Great story!

I loved it, a sweet story, tender and succinct. Good luck in the contest!

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by l8bloom01/22/07

brought tears to my eyes

I'd give it a "6" if I could. Loved the inclusion of the little kitty. Do keep writing, please.

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by Anonymous01/22/07

What

a wonderful story.

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so touching

I think this is what heaven will be like

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by DesertPirate01/22/07

We can all hope

Rachlou,
We can all hope that it will be this way when the time comes. Damn you write a great story. Thanks!

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by 01/22/07

Rach, beautifully done.

A love throughout time, so wonderful. Good luck in the contest. You've got my vote.

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by duddle14601/22/07

Forever.

A sweet evocative endearing story. One that is tragic but at the same time reassuring. Rachlou once again has written a character into her story that summons up so many emotions ~ all of them good. Terrific Write. Enjoyable read.

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by Anonymous01/22/07

Very Moving & Flowing - The Waterworks That Is

Authoress - you have a special touch to move emotions regardless of age.

Thanks

With Very High Regard

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by gatorhermit01/22/07

Very Nice Romance

Concise; flows well. I like the cat.

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by Anonymous01/22/07

Yeah,

I know. Men aren't supposed to cry.

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by Darkniciad01/22/07

Beautiful

Beautiful and moving - good luck in the contest!

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by drksideofthemoon01/23/07

Moving

Very moving, Rach. A really well done, sentimental piece, good luck in the contest.

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by damppanties01/24/07

Good one

That was such a sweet, peaceful read. Good luck in the contest.

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by 01/25/07

thank you for this lovely sweet story

Very touching, evocative, and peaceful.

Good luck in the contest!

Maharat

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by RogueLurker01/30/07

Beautifully told

A wonderfully touching story, Rach. You've captured her life, her love, her longings and evoked such a heartfelt reaction in readers.

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by slyc_willie01/30/07

Exquisite

even though I got a sneak peak, I still loved reading this again. The cat was a great touch, adding a little levity to the story. Excellent story, Rach, as always.

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by Nirvanadragones01/31/07

Absolute beauty

An intense story of real love. Your imagery is so tangible, I felt like I could reach out and touch Oliver's fur, feel his warm little cat-body. The flow of words is smooth, and and rich, and deliciously sad.

Simply a beautiful story. A treasure. Thank you for writing it.

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by ABSTRUSE01/31/07

Endearing...

sigh....I'm a closet romantic. Such beautiful imagery, it filled the senses, moved gracefully as a dance itself, bittersweet and beautiful.

Abstruse.

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by drksideofthemoon02/01/07

Wonderful...

A beautifully written story. Just wow! There is doubt that you are a true writer. Good luck in the contest.

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by kbate02/06/07

It is time for a W

to go on your Lit author page to contrast with the red "H" that is next to so many of your stories.

This is excellent. Moving. One of the best reads I have had. I am grateful that your story ended up under my cursor.

Thank you.

kb

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by TiggerToo02/06/07

I think I'm ...

getting more sentimental. Beautiful stories such as this one will make that happen. All my kitties say "Hi!" to Oliver. Phil

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by Selena_Kitt02/06/07

Okay.......

It isn't enough that you're stunningly beautiful, you have to be a fantastic writer too? I give in, I give up! You had me at "Dust motes dances in the air like tiny fairies"! :)

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by wtdgirl102/27/07

Oh My....

You made me cry!
I mean, really cry!!
And I cried buckets for ages over this!!!
It was amazing, I wish I could write things like this.
I hope you won't mind me adding it as my favourite or printing it off?
(Every now and then I like to cry. And in my line of work it helps to let it all out as it were.)
Thank you so much.

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That was a wonderful story

That was a wonderful story but it pisses me off that I knew the ending as soon as she looked at herself in the mirror.

Still, the imagery was beautiful. I could not only see her, I could feel Eleanor.

Now, I'm going to have to read more of your stuff. Unfortunately, when I am writing I never read. My writing must be coming to an end, now that I am reading.

I kind of feel like the wicked witch, "I'm melting."

Thanks for a wonderful story that was beautifully crafted.

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by Nightowl2203/20/07

A Beautiful story.

It should be a happy theme since Eleanor is so happy but I feel like Jessie, so sad.. Wonderfully told story.. A tear-jerker but wonderfully told.

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by Anonymous03/23/07

...

So beautifully, hauntingly sad... Yet lovely.

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by Roge472xal06/18/07

I do not have the talent

to be able to comment adequately on this story. Wonderfully imagined, and so poured into our minds. :-)
Go for it!!
Roger

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by lgreenwood02/04/08

Thank You

... for the beautifully touching story. So far it's the best contest entry I've read.

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by PostScriptor12/02/08

Oh, rach

No points off for it, but this seems awfully derivative – think "Titanic" LOL! Oh heck, that story was probably derivative as well. Also, it was pretty predictable, and consequently lacked a certain amount of 'punch'

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by tazz31711/16/11

THOUGHTS FROM THE EDGE AND BEYOND

AND NOW THE LONG DARK WAIT FOR OTHERS TO APPEAR. tk u mlj lv nv

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