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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/27/07

Mmmm, keep going....

Very good writing, and I would like to see what develops next.

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by eightballbum01/27/07

Loved it

I loved the frustration your character goes through. Dealing with guilt and humility.

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by asiaprof02/16/07

A wonderful first submission!

Being torn in opposite directions
By diamterical desires
And the mixed emotions
Are brought out so well.

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