All Comments on 'A Foreign Affair'

by BenLong

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
opening doors

So you've openned the door to something. You can't quit here.

I await

SlickTonySlickTonyabout 17 years ago
Cybering at its Best

If this is what cybering can be made to be, I'm sorry it didn't exist when I was in circulation!

I assume you're going to carry on.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
(sci-fi music)

Well-written

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
CHARMING

I REALLY LIKED IT.

NO SADO OR MACHO,JUST ENJOYMENT ON BOTH SIDES

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Dripping

This was by far one of the best, but of course you will be continuing this or already have right? I have to hear more especially after being so drenched after this. Thank you.

GulfMisprintGulfMisprintalmost 13 years ago
at the end...

that was a really cute twist.

HikergirlHikergirlalmost 12 years ago
Ah...the power of the imagination...

...is really a wonderful thing, eh?

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
A LOT OF THINGS MAY BE USED AS A SCARF

towels, pillows, linens shirts etc. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
wtf

the story just ends like that ? there is no ending !!!

Marklynda2Marklynda2about 1 year ago

Isn't that spooky? An out of body experience thousands of miles apart! A very well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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