All Comments on 'Cyber Mates Meet'

by RonClarkeson

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cybersexbombercybersexbomberabout 17 years ago
perfect beginning, anticlimatic ending

The idea of having the man's point of view and then the woman's POV is great, to bad you didn't develop the ending, it sort of falls flat, one more page to resolve everything would have made it!

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