All Comments on 'Reinvention'

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A moving poem, one that could be interpreted in many ways. I'll stick to what's on the surface and say this: tender, personal and quite intimate. The last two stanzas, in particular, make me feel this.

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Congrats on the greenie on this fascinating piece. My first reaction is that this makes me think of H.G. Wells' "Time Machine", and the protagonist's reactions to seeing some of the horrific changes that occur over time. Okay, so it doesn't have to be what you were thinking but it's an honest reaction to the prismatic affect of your writing on reality.

array of possibilities...lost in spin patterns of the title...luv it..blue

This poem niggles me a bit though I'm very unsure why. It seems a little overly self conscious though I suspect that's me rather than the poem.

Re: reinvention.