All Comments on 'Exploration'

I loved this story and the previous one. Can't wait to see where you decide to go with this! Delicious!

you continue to write the same old warmed over crap. Do all of us a favor and find something else to do rather than re-envent the wheel. Or you could just do like Sylvia Plath did.

You write a nice story, notwithstanding the comments from the person below. I would only add that if he is bored by your writing, perhaps he should find another author!

By the by, "staid" means conservative; you mean "stayed" as in 'He stayed out overnight'. But otherwise, thanks. I enjoyed your stories.

Cheers, Michael

Longing to learn what happened next.

This could develop into a novella.

Longing to learn what happened next.

This could develop into a novella.

here we go again another wannabe that writes a continuation of a story and fails to give them the same title so readers know they are connected. delete and retitle your stories numbering them so readers know what order to read them in.