by Frederick Carol
I liked your story but think it has to be another one soon with him taking the two of em at the same time.
to this hot beginning. You write erotically and with interesting situations. This was my second of your works. I'll read them all soon. Thanks for writing them.
The End - for now - ....is more apt. But then apparently the author has decided to leave it as such incomplete. It could have been better if a few more pages were added but now it may be toooooooo late. The story had been written and published in the year 2000 about 13 years back and so no chance of being revived after such a long gap/lapse of time ?