All Comments on 'The Line'

Obviously, he still has issues with an anonymous donor. Not a good way to start out.

...and played with it. Ha.

-Pultoy

his old trusty shotgun and show the assholes how to cut in line then thrown the slut out and the assholes with her... But you stopped all that...cute

I enjoyed it! I think I'll be thinking about it for a while....

Thanks, ohio

Funny and a bit sad at the edges. I am not saying more for the sake of the twist. <P>

Good Job! More stories soon, yes?

Nice story.

It's not holloween yet is it? what a joke.

little one inch cock hard. They write the dumbiest and stupiditest stories know to man and beast. They get off on everyone in the world fucking their wives. How can they fuck them with a one incher...MUNGOPARK is one of the manny BRITISH wimp writers. He also likes to be butt fucked..

Before criticizing the writer, why don't you learn how to spell! You grammar sucks and you need to go back to skool!

here. This one should have been purged.

here. This one should have been purged.

Original and sharp. More please. Mancelt.

With a nice twist. Looking forward to more from you.

With a nice twist. Looking forward to more from you.

With a nice twist. Looking forward to more from you.

Great story

I don't know which is worse: The weirdos that write or ones that enjoy reading this garbage.

with a thanks to Johnny Cash. TK U MLJ LV NV

Some "writers" shouldn´t be allowed to publish their rubbish..This one is absolute junk. Sorry.

Didn't see it coming! Nice job!

Couples pay thousands for injections, men in line pay to have sex with wives...donor would be anonymous...

Overhead almost eliminated...just laundry bill and occasional new mattress.

Cost-benefit analysis having been completed, need only to make sure injectees are holding sample cups when husband retrieves wife.

The wife is certainly not going to tell especially if she gets diamond bauble as CONGRATULATIONS present.

Might consider ''semen supplements'' for the male clients of in vitro clinic escort service...

To assure reputation of the business, cultivate a select clientele...ages 20-40 former almost pro atheletes who did not make it to show...

Guaranteed baby boom would ensue as wives would want child after child...all sessions visually recorded and stored until child bearing age has passed then billions more in additional income from amateur porn industry...added factor of housewifes begging males to fill them up...then for those who desire certain endings wifes would engage in the oft suggested practice of pillows under butt, legs raised to add gravity factor and wife opening herself up to show cream filled center.

Sorry to say but my injections would not be visible as my typical spurt exits cannon at exceptional speed and has been measured to cover thirteen feet on the rise before noisily SPLATTING against wall...never did do the Calculus even though she was my married college Trigonometry instructor.

She stopped asking me to grab her hair and ejaculate on face saying ''TAKE THAT BITCH'' because series of black eyes became too difficult to explain to hubby...and for cuckolded spouse to explain to police...so we switched to blasting away at that hanging doodad in throat.

She did havea few severe cases of laryngitis before I graduated though.

Now she pouts when her 20 year old daughter and I bring grandkids over. Yep I fucked the wife, married the daughter and my former instructor stomps her foot and walks away in a huff when my wife claims sore throat is from yelling at our six kids. Got to go now...wife and mother-in-law are shopping and twin 18 year old kid sisters are here to babysit and I will spend a few hours at firing range

What happened? Why was he in the hospital? Just what?

I' m surprised more husbands don't have a few sleepless nights when they go the donor route.