All Comments on 'Proud Mary'

Nicely woven tale of two people passing, sharing a moment not to come again.

As so often happens in life. Nice effort, I liked it.

Blow job and sex that is! I liked the twist at the end.

I honestly think you out did yourself with this one. But then again, I have a few more stories to go through. That was hot, erotic, seat squirming, wish it was me, kinda story.

Thank you once again for the pleasure of reading.

Well plotted, well written and so utterly true to life. The kind of stuff I love to read!

This is a great story. It's very well written and believable.

The ending is sad and a little frustrating, but utterly true to life and a really incredible tale.

Beautifully visual, evocative, poignant with an interesting plot and filled with real characters. I loved it. Thanks, and keep writing!

I'm struck by your pen name, slyc willie, yet your stories are anything but, real emotions and (while imaginative and colorful) real people.