by TxRad
Really enjoyed the slow build up, the reluctance, the experimentation...a must read for women thinking about sex toys.
spen sterling
I liked this story a lot, though it is in need of proof-reading and it does not seem to be complete.
I enjoyed it. I think a series is in order with each new toy that arrives...lol!
Bart
I'd like to see what kind of toys she gets. ;) I also need to go to my local adult store and convince them they need a contest like this and let me enter it. :D ~ Red
I love the build up and the character development that you use, wonderful story and yes a series would be nice :)
Female masturbation is a HUGE turn-on for me, and this story really creates the feeling that you're getting inside of her head and experiencing those emotions with her. It's the kind of story you can truly get lost in.
SG
Read all these comments - you have to give us more. Get her husband in on it. There are soooo many possibilities!
Jerry
I think this story is hot!! I would love to see a follow up story of how she explores her body more, and oh yes! toy of the week. Keep writing.
Loved it.
Didn't read it all ...... but copied the rest to read later because I loved the first part.
Very hot story! I loved the character build up. I loved her exploration and her learning about her body and about sex. I can't wait to read the rest of the series.
Really enjoyed. You should explore more chapters ie when Ron gets home when Rose returns