All Comments on 'Going to the Doctor'

Cute story - technically needs some improvement, but has potential. The main character certainly enjoys his task and plays it out well! The other characters are almost too conveniently contrived, but naive and serve their intended purpose for the thrill of the story!

This is a good little story and a good masturbation fantasy. I wondered why we were in the doctor's office, of all places, but guessed it increased the tension regarding discovery.

I also enjoyed the messy final scene with all the confusion created when a cock starts shooting everywhere. It was good fun and stimulating.

Will you write more?