All Comments on 'Suzanne's Dance'

That was really hot. Keep writing. I hope that I will read more of your stories soon.

a real good story and i love it because it didnt make the girl out to be some big titted slut but a nice 34b with a nice shaved pussy

Did I miss something?? Who is Adrian?? That name just came out of midair.

he pops in and out of the author's mind!

Please let there be a part 2!!!

This was a very well writtne story. Lets hope there is at least a part 2 where she completes the entertainment for all attendees including exploring her bisexual urges with some hot pussy munching.

I didn't like the fact that a "loving" husband and brother can just let the wife be a whore like that. The ending killed it.

That was a great, erotic story. The build-up was fantastic. The Adrian references confused the story a bit, but the rest was very good. You can edit it if you want to change some of it. Then re-submit it with the changes. Just a constructive suggestion. Keep them coming.

but reasonably well-written.

hot story.. not to everyones taste.. but good never the less.

What more can I say?

Not normally what I look for in an incest story, but boy was it well worth the read. I too was confused about the mention of Adrian, but assume that was just a typo. You have a great talent for writing erotica. Please continue and, this time, try a good old mother and son incestual version.

Yeah, not utterly believable. Still worth the read, though.

Also, nice Elder Scrolls reference in the username. Wonder what kind of damage you'd get using one of those.

I think that says it all!

very hot

And for everyone to be O.K. with it, couldn't be better.

I really liked the story. It definitely took a strange twist at the end. I would have liked to read a little more of how the rest of the night went.

Great story totally captivating!!!

Hands down!

So hot, one of the sexiest stories on literotica. It certainly has me wet, thank you author.

I just read it again, I got just as wet as the first time, will keep revisiting