All Comments on 'Storylines'

I was barely able to read the story. Not a single one of the multitude of exclamation marks you used was necessary, and every single one was distracting. If your words can't convey the excitement you intend, use different words. I'm not saying that you should never use an exclamation point, or pretending that I know the rule for how often to use them, just that you used entirely too many.

The story itself was good. I don't mean to discourage you from writing, you could be really great.

The exclamation points didn't distract me, I didn't even notice! I absolutely loved this one! I dare said person that anonymously wrote that, to write something better! Once again five starred and added to favorites! Lol!