by JustinNickThyme
out of all of the hediously racist interracial stories on this site, this the most racist I've read. what could've been quite hot was ruined by the "n-word" and exessive use of "nice white..." not to mention the perpetual use of the quality of skin color - once is more than enough. Take those elements out, then read the story - nothing will be lost - all will be gained.
thank you for setting the human race back a million years.
i coudn't finshing reading your story.i hope you don't write another story ever!!!!!
Call me a throwback but I enjoyed the idea of a baby making ranch. I did not like the interracial sex and would have preferred the girl to actually get pregnant, but overall an interesting story.
Would have been a good story if it wasn't for the use of the n-word....
You spelled out my dream in this story: to impregnate beautiful women, consequence-free. Didn't even mind all the N-words in the story, seeing as they only served to establish one of the characters. Nicely done.
This reminds me of how my mom got pregnant with my baby brothers and had them with my help and with in two hours she called her boyfriend and next month she announced she was pregnant and I was like looks like we’re getting ready for the next football team lol and then when mom was five months pregnant she got a tattoo that said baby factory.
This was hot but would probably be a bigger hit with racists than anyone else. Like idk nothing kills a mood faster for me personally. But I am certain this will do well with that crowd. That all said you have great potential and if you ever wanna branch out to similar stories that don’t make everything about race and racism I know I certainly would enjoy it. But either way it’s clear you’re enjoying yourself.