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All Comments on 'Spirals In A Bottle'

by LasciviousSanity

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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A strange little prose piece; aren't they a bit old to play spin the bottle?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Imaginative

A well conceived prose poem with good detail and atmosphere. Mentioned in today's new poem reviews.

Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionabout 17 years ago
did she win...

or not- I like the way you leave the reader thinking at the end

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Hi. I'm M but I go by many names. LasciviousSanity around these parts. The only thing useful to know about me is that I love to write. At home, school, in the bathroom, or in a bar. Near or far. Up or down, I write all over town.