All Comments on 'Sold'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
VERY nice

I hope this is just chapter one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Chapter 2?

What seems like a nice start to a good 3-4 chapter story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Need to add more.

This is a good start. Please finish it up with some more chapters.

DryhillDryhillalmost 14 years ago
GOOD START

What a nice thoughtful Master. i hope she enjoys her weekend, which i also hope we are going to read about.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Bad

Not well written. Do you not understand what kidnapping is? I'm letting you know this isn't it fyi. Obviously form her reaction this is not within her limits so it's not consensual and not BDSM.

Kidnapping is the taking away or transportation of a person against that person's will, usually to hold the person in false imprisonment, a confinement without legal authority.

Selling is offering to exchange an item of value for a different item. The original item of value being offered may be either tangible or intangible. The second item, usually money, is most often seen by the seller as being of equal or greater value than that being offered for sale.

Now if she had fantasies of being sold this would be fine. But as you can see they aren't the same thing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
That was silly

I think the slave goes with Becky and then leaves - permanently. Becky will be lucky if the slave doesn't hurt her before leaving. Stupid story

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