All Comments on 'Love on a crowded train'

Hot...and sensual...a delight to read. Welcome to Literotica where there is always a warm welcome for our UK friends.

Hot...and sensual...a delight to read. Welcome to Literotica where there is always a warm welcome for our UK friends.

I was surprised by the ending. I thought it was a guy/girl scene. So you weren't caught? I noticed some typos that a word processor could check (example: "Oh no she standing next..." which I think should have been "she's standing"), but I understood what you were saying.

.....lovely rhythm and surprise ending BUT (see below) spoilt by typos eg "to sure" should be "too sure", - sorry to be pernickety but I am English ;-)