All Comments on 'Discovery Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Memories

Sounds VERY realistic to me....Your Teacher and her beliefs that all women have an 'inner slut' rings quite true.........but only some men can bring that out........as only some women can bring out the same in a man.........Thanks for the reminder of my memories as well.

Keep up the writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Hogwash

This is another adolescent fantasy, and poorly written too.

don87654don87654about 17 years ago
I cannnot help but wonder..perhaps there is more?

It is overly obvious that you are trying to say something in this story that is not being said. A 14 year difference with her being the older of the two of you, would probably have her wanting to have a baby with you so that she could continue fucking you into her older age when she could not attract any other men.

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