All Comments on 'Now Spread Your Legs'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Great story

An excellent orginal story. I hope you will continue it. A must read for those into femdom themes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Iteresting premise.

But barely a cameo.

Too short. No details about how she got him into being cuffed. No description of her. Face? Shape? Height? Breasts? Nipples? Pussy? Hairy? Trimmed? Trimmed? Nipples?

Needed more dialog about what she was doing to him and whether he liked it. Needed her to tell him what she was going to do to him and what she would be wanting him to do to her.

Had gread potential. But like running a great 1/4 mile of a marathon and then stopping.

Three stars.

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