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by Slut2theHeart

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Adham07Adham07almost 16 years ago
Very Nice

Thats a really nice story. I'm Egyptian by the way (although I am lighter than the guy you mentioned), so maybe I could be your next prince lol. But on a serious note I think your story overall is really good but it needs to be longer and have a bit more conflict, nevertheless you have the nucleus of one hell of a story.

PS Is this a true story!

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