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by Unbridled_Passion03/05/07

wow

I don't know what else to say except that this poem is beautiful!

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by wildsweetone03/05/07

Poetry Forum

This poem was mentioned in the New Poems Review thread in the Poetry Forum.

Nice to meet a fellow kiwi poet. :)

wildsweetone

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by Curiouswife03/05/07

Thanks for sharing

Wistfully sweet.

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by rachlou03/05/07

Lovely

I could relate to the sentiments in this. Thank you.

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by MagicaPractica03/05/07

lovely

Yearning simplified. Very nice.

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